We have been learnign how to create a sense of fear in our readers. This is Ramarni's writing, leave a comment, did it frighten you?
In the moonlight Jack caught a glimpse of a large smooth white face. It was as featureless as a blank wall except for two massive glossy red eyes. Jack felt big footsteps. His skin went pale. From the side of a white building a ghost reached out to grab him. He was so sleepy he thought it was a dream. At that moment the ghost flew out the sky. Jack jumped with terror. Then two of them appeared they started to whisper words that trickled down his spine. One of them forced into Jack’s body. Jack felt weird he forgot his life. B…b…b… but what will he say to his mum he thought they won’t believe that he heard a ghost talk to him
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