Monday 24th June 2013
LO: I am learning to use excellent examples of vocabulary,
technique and description to write a description of a setting that makes my
reader feel like they are there.
The block door was cold. As I went to open it the metal
sucked all the warmth out of my hand. I arrived at my green, glossed front door
and dried my soaked to the bone feet. The doors whirred open after I jerked my
key about in the lock. I entered and I brushed my rough, large fingers along the
old, rundown wooden shoe rack. I strolled casually into my living room and sat
down on the black leather chairs. Next to the chairs, stood a silver Sony TV
with Sky+. Above the chair, was a desktop computer. It whirred and clogged as I
switched it on. I glanced at all the photos in my living room and I was so amazed. I twirled the TV control
about in between my fingers for a second and I felt the tingling sensation.
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