Monday 24th June 2013
Lo: I am learning to use excellent examples of vocabulary, technique
and description, to write a description of a setting that makes my reader feel
like they are there.
One beautiful and fresh day Charlie was going of to the park
as he opened the squeaky and rusty gate he could see the dogs chasing the
wooden stick. The babies on the swings back, and forward, Middle aged kids kicking
the football high in the ocean blue sky like a rocket taking of.
Charlie could feel the fresh summer breeze gently on his arm. As
he was running he slithered his finger tip across swing chain. Beneath the
swings was a rough bag inside the bag was a pile of craggy dog eared books for
the book sale in the old run down charity
shop with infuriating sculptures and knick – knacks.
As he was strolling down something attract his eye it was
shiny and it led under the ground. He wanted to follow it but it seemed like
his eyes was written “GET OUT” and with no seconds he
rushed out and sprinted home with nothing In his way…
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