Jack`s writing on the Theme of Setting

Tommy strolled slowly down Robin Good-Fellows Road to an amazing party. The sun beamed into the conservatory, music was blaring out of the bungalow. Tommy knocked on the wooden front door. Charlie opened the door.
"The party is ready!" He shouted over the music.
Charlie and Tommy were brothers. In a flash people came, crowds and crowds. They partied all night. Time flew by and the next day came. The house was a absolute mess, rubbish everywhere and people still laying on the floor from last night. The house was wrecked.
Long, colourful party streamers hung from the fan, plastic cups layered the floor. Beside the cups was cake printed into what used to be a blue, lovely carpet, the prints lead to the kitchen door. Tommy`s eyes followed the heavy prints, and ominous smell drifted into Tommy`s nostrils. He slowly and nervously walked into the kitchen. Party hats hung from the cupboards, the smell of stale beer floated in the air past the cupboard door that was missing a hinge. In the hall, cake was sprinkled up the walls. Beyond the hall the toilet was clogged with toilet roll.